This is a 'wow' worthy fic. I love how you built this up so slowly. The alternates were incredibly strong as was the world's rules they talked about! Thank you for writing such a great piece of fic. BDSM isn't one of my personal kinks and i still read it regardless. That says something!
Rodney and John, took those two long enough didn't they? But that final part where it just clicks because everything else was just a very, very long courtship. And i can very much see John as an 'all or nothing' kinda guy. Which would be the one thing that could thaw Rodney and his walls that he had built around himself for so long. You nailed it on the head. *grin and wanders off*
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on Feb. 24th, 2006 07:46 am (UTC)Rodney and John, took those two long enough didn't they? But that final part where it just clicks because everything else was just a very, very long courtship. And i can very much see John as an 'all or nothing' kinda guy. Which would be the one thing that could thaw Rodney and his walls that he had built around himself for so long. You nailed it on the head. *grin and wanders off*