Decided to use my lunchbreak really useful and catch up with this amazing story and OMG it keeps getting better and better. You paint such great pictures of all the people involved, making them come alive on my screen really.
I like the darkness of this fic (reminds me a bit of the Spartacus Blood and Sand show on TV that I adored too). But the best part, if I had to pick one, was the part where Gibbs slowly realized it was Tony he was fighting. I like that you didn't make him see it immediately but that he only noticed after some time.
And the way they had sex was so not what the spectators wanted I can imagine. Not the usual brutality but something as close to making love as they could get at that point.
Tony's thankfulness when finding out why Gibbs broke his fingers was endearing. Thanks for another great update!
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on Jun. 7th, 2011 11:50 am (UTC)I like the darkness of this fic (reminds me a bit of the Spartacus Blood and Sand show on TV that I adored too). But the best part, if I had to pick one, was the part where Gibbs slowly realized it was Tony he was fighting. I like that you didn't make him see it immediately but that he only noticed after some time.
And the way they had sex was so not what the spectators wanted I can imagine. Not the usual brutality but something as close to making love as they could get at that point.
Tony's thankfulness when finding out why Gibbs broke his fingers was endearing. Thanks for another great update!