"... he wasn't sure why being thrown around and generally sat on by Colonel Sheppard was helping his mood but somehow it was..."
*giggle* That is an AWESOME line! Also, I'm loving the BDSM scenes, very well written, very organic. Many BDSM fics I've read seem so forced, but yours flow very nicely, the dynamic is just right.
Also? I hate you for leaving us hanging at THAT point. Jeez, what're you trying to do to us?!???!!!
Luckily (I almost wrote lickily, hee!) I adore you for everything else, so... you are most readily forgiven. XD
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on Feb. 20th, 2006 02:04 pm (UTC)*giggle* That is an AWESOME line! Also, I'm loving the BDSM scenes, very well written, very organic. Many BDSM fics I've read seem so forced, but yours flow very nicely, the dynamic is just right.
Also? I hate you for leaving us hanging at THAT point. Jeez, what're you trying to do to us?!???!!!
Luckily (I almost wrote lickily, hee!) I adore you for everything else, so... you are most readily forgiven. XD
BTW, mind if I add you?