That was a great chapter! My favorite line was "I didn't screw up," Ronon said. Everyone glared at him. "Well I didn't," he shrugged. I love Ronon and I could see him saying that. I can't wait to read about the training sessions; those should be hilarious!
I was wondering; once this story is done, are you going to write a companion piece to this about the General and Dr. Sheppard? I am so in love with this alternate universe, and a story that takes place there would be fantastic!
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on Feb. 18th, 2006 03:45 pm (UTC)I was wondering; once this story is done, are you going to write a companion piece to this about the General and Dr. Sheppard? I am so in love with this alternate universe, and a story that takes place there would be fantastic!