Oh. Oh my! Such an emotionally charged chapter! (And the previous ones were as well, but I needed time to remember how to breathe, you know?) I love that you had Tony react to what Gibbs had done the way he did--kept him completely in character as you had portrayed him, and didn't sacrifice that characterization for an easier pay off. And tying Hansen to Morley was brilliant (I was wondering how Gibbs would get her). Seriously, this story is so well-written and planned out that I'm so glad you update as frequently as you do.
I do have a question about gripping wrists to feel for a dynamic (and if I missed it in your author's notes, I apologize). How can they tell each others' dynamics in that manner? (I'm not scoffing at all--just genuinely curious).
But yeah, I'm thoroughly enjoying your work, and am looking forward to your next update.
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on Mar. 18th, 2010 02:02 pm (UTC)I love that you had Tony react to what Gibbs had done the way he did--kept him completely in character as you had portrayed him, and didn't sacrifice that characterization for an easier pay off.
And tying Hansen to Morley was brilliant (I was wondering how Gibbs would get her). Seriously, this story is so well-written and planned out that I'm so glad you update as frequently as you do.
I do have a question about gripping wrists to feel for a dynamic (and if I missed it in your author's notes, I apologize). How can they tell each others' dynamics in that manner? (I'm not scoffing at all--just genuinely curious).
But yeah, I'm thoroughly enjoying your work, and am looking forward to your next update.