Every time you post I just keep wanting more. I hit the end thinking 'gah.' I know I need to be patient and wait, but it's hard, and no one I know would describe me as patient. HiPS was the first story that I read by you (recced somewhere) and I fell in love with this universe and proceeded to read it all (even though I had never seen SGA before) and then continued on to read a lot of what you have written and everything NCIS. In fact, I friended you specifically to get these updates quicker.
On to actual feedback. I love the interaction between Gibbs and Tony. You can see the foundation being laid, but also see how they have so many problems that it will take 5 years to get to a point where they can actually have that relationship. I wanted to cry for the sub at the Extreme club. For a minor character, she was portrayed so well and had such depth. I loved the contrast between her and Abby (I'm also horrible with names and can't remember hers even though I just read this). I'm wondering how you are going to fit so much into the next three chapters. I can't wait.
Oh, I also think that the portrayal of Tony's trust issues and how part of him wants to trust and the other part wants to run screaming away is so amazing. I can see him wanting to pack up everything and leave rather than take a chance on Gibbs. This just struck me so much, since I have many deep seated trust issues and I would have been running in Tony's position. In fact, I have.
Finally, I am secretly hoping that Abby will make Tony a new coffin. :)
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on Mar. 18th, 2010 09:56 am (UTC)On to actual feedback. I love the interaction between Gibbs and Tony. You can see the foundation being laid, but also see how they have so many problems that it will take 5 years to get to a point where they can actually have that relationship. I wanted to cry for the sub at the Extreme club. For a minor character, she was portrayed so well and had such depth. I loved the contrast between her and Abby (I'm also horrible with names and can't remember hers even though I just read this). I'm wondering how you are going to fit so much into the next three chapters. I can't wait.
Oh, I also think that the portrayal of Tony's trust issues and how part of him wants to trust and the other part wants to run screaming away is so amazing. I can see him wanting to pack up everything and leave rather than take a chance on Gibbs. This just struck me so much, since I have many deep seated trust issues and I would have been running in Tony's position. In fact, I have.
Finally, I am secretly hoping that Abby will make Tony a new coffin. :)
On to bed now, seeing as it is almost 6 AM here.