I was going to give feedback after each chapter, like I usually do, but I ended up barreling through this - and didn't stop, LOL! Random things that I remember:
MULDER! WHEEEEE! Him coming home and slipping unwittingly into bed with Tony was priceless. I couldn't stop laughing! Silly Mulder, though - thinking Skinner would take on another sub like that! *wags finger at him*
Mulder showing Tony the playroom - and profiling him. Hee.
All the parts with Skinner and Mulder, really - everything from Skinner in Gibbs' basement to Mulder talking with Tony, and then the two of them together. *happysigh*
Skinner being the one to like dressing up - the image of him in that pirate getup... guh. *dead*
The image of Tony in that pirate getup... double guh. *dead again*
I loved that you went back and forth between Tony and Gibbs - Gibbs being all growly like a bear with a torn in his paw, steadfastly refusing to get himself into a relationship again... and then finally breaking down and storming out of the house. SO GIBBS.
*SPORFLE* Gibbs intimidating the attendant at the club. Seriously - they need to get someone who's more of a dom to man the helm (heh - pirate reference. I'm so clever!). Though, I think Gibbs would have glared a man like that into submission as well. *bg*
Gibbs taking over Tony's whipping - and making the amateur freaking whimper when Gibbs squeezed too hard on his wrist. I couldn't stop smiling through that - I was saying to myself, "YEAH. You don't fuck with Gibbs!" Hehe.
Gibbs actually whipping Tony. Hot damn. *dies for a third time*
And then everything after that - from Tony seeing that it was Gibbs who whipped him, to Gibbs ordering Tony to take off his shirt, to that kiss, and then the end.
/rambling
I would die a fourth time, but I don't think my brain will be able to come back from the dead after dying four times in a row...
Long story short, I loved it! I can't wait for the next part. *bg*
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on Oct. 12th, 2009 06:55 pm (UTC)MULDER! WHEEEEE! Him coming home and slipping unwittingly into bed with Tony was priceless. I couldn't stop laughing! Silly Mulder, though - thinking Skinner would take on another sub like that! *wags finger at him*
Mulder showing Tony the playroom - and profiling him. Hee.
All the parts with Skinner and Mulder, really - everything from Skinner in Gibbs' basement to Mulder talking with Tony, and then the two of them together. *happysigh*
Skinner being the one to like dressing up - the image of him in that pirate getup... guh. *dead*
The image of Tony in that pirate getup... double guh. *dead again*
I loved that you went back and forth between Tony and Gibbs - Gibbs being all growly like a bear with a torn in his paw, steadfastly refusing to get himself into a relationship again... and then finally breaking down and storming out of the house. SO GIBBS.
*SPORFLE* Gibbs intimidating the attendant at the club. Seriously - they need to get someone who's more of a dom to man the helm (heh - pirate reference. I'm so clever!). Though, I think Gibbs would have glared a man like that into submission as well. *bg*
Gibbs taking over Tony's whipping - and making the amateur freaking whimper when Gibbs squeezed too hard on his wrist. I couldn't stop smiling through that - I was saying to myself, "YEAH. You don't fuck with Gibbs!" Hehe.
Gibbs actually whipping Tony. Hot damn. *dies for a third time*
And then everything after that - from Tony seeing that it was Gibbs who whipped him, to Gibbs ordering Tony to take off his shirt, to that kiss, and then the end.
/rambling
I would die a fourth time, but I don't think my brain will be able to come back from the dead after dying four times in a row...
Long story short, I loved it! I can't wait for the next part. *bg*