Swoon ... OMG! I feel weak at the knees just reading this ... soooo goood. great dialogue and fantastic visuals.
Loved the Skinner and Gibbs dialogue in Part 2.
Adored Tony's first real look at the very real master/slave dynamic coming down the stairs and seeing Fox's naked reddened ass ... turned out to be a great hangover cure for Tony boy.
And then in Part 3 - "We named him after the greatest singer/showman of all time." Absolute truth here, I squeed at this bit. And Fox and Tony's dialogue was great so many nice bits. Tony's revelation of feeling "Safe" as he imagined Gibbs dominating him. Oh my ... so perfect. You rock at Tony.
Then you blew me away in Part 4 - Gibbs stubborn refusal to give in at first to going to Tony. Then his amazing entrance, now that would be a sight to behold. Possessive Dominating Gibbs at his finest!!!
Any then you hit us with the whipping scene, now that made me weak at the knees, your descriptions had me flying along with Tony.
I cannot wait for Parts 5, 6 & 7 tomorrow. Well obviously I will have to wait and I'm stubborn enough to do just that. I think I refreshed your page oh about fifty times today hoping to see your posting so I'm sure it will be the same again tomorrow.
Anyway hugs and cheers for Two Masters, thoroughly living up to my expectations of fanfuckingtastic.
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Feedback for Parts 2, 3 & 4
on Oct. 12th, 2009 11:08 am (UTC)Loved the Skinner and Gibbs dialogue in Part 2.
Adored Tony's first real look at the very real master/slave dynamic coming down the stairs and seeing Fox's naked reddened ass ... turned out to be a great hangover cure for Tony boy.
And then in Part 3 - "We named him after the greatest singer/showman of all time." Absolute truth here, I squeed at this bit. And Fox and Tony's dialogue was great so many nice bits. Tony's revelation of feeling "Safe" as he imagined Gibbs dominating him. Oh my ... so perfect. You rock at Tony.
Then you blew me away in Part 4 - Gibbs stubborn refusal to give in at first to going to Tony. Then his amazing entrance, now that would be a sight to behold. Possessive Dominating Gibbs at his finest!!!
Any then you hit us with the whipping scene, now that made me weak at the knees, your descriptions had me flying along with Tony.
I cannot wait for Parts 5, 6 & 7 tomorrow. Well obviously I will have to wait and I'm stubborn enough to do just that. I think I refreshed your page oh about fifty times today hoping to see your posting so I'm sure it will be the same again tomorrow.
Anyway hugs and cheers for Two Masters, thoroughly living up to my expectations of fanfuckingtastic.
Kalrhyssian