I love the way you show the broad range of reactions different team members have and the ways they rally around Tony; it's very realistic and shows alot of depth. The same goes to Vance and Tony's Dad, it would have been too simple to have his father be a flat out villain. You've also shown different types of predators with the three men, making them realistic and disturbing. Excellent characterization throughout the whole story and I'm looking foreward to the finish.
And I absolutely loved Abby and the not being able to let go of Tony's hand. That's the Abby I remember and love!
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on Apr. 4th, 2009 12:43 am (UTC)And I absolutely loved Abby and the not being able to let go of Tony's hand. That's the Abby I remember and love!