Ok I screwed up my italics coding and deleted the first part which is THIS comment (now following the second (above part) of my feedback). You should read this first and the above comment after it for the sequence ...
Guh! Love roaming hands demanding and commanding obedience and respect!
And that John is so greedy for Rodney that there’s no way they are going to work! I love it when someone can’t get enough of the other!
And it’s very spot on to have Rodney still lacking confidence in the long term success of the relationship. He’s given his body, and his mind has relaxed enough to find out that it can be really good, and further on Rodney remembers he has trusted John with his heart too but re the relationship - I love that Rodney is still a bit confused about understanding what John sees in him and that that aspect is working out separately.
he'd been too overwhelmed to act out any kind of role at all last night oh you put into words what I was trying to say in my fb to Part 10 about the sex. Also I remembered another thought on Part 10 – that you avoided that cliché of the long elegant cock. Nice that John’s cock isn’t classically “beautiful”.
Ooh! I loved the blow job and Rodney can’t help but brag! Knees trembling? Legs weak? Body totally boneless and un-coordinated?" lol!
"Although…if you could see your way clear to playing with it any time soon that would make me a very happy man," Rodney is such a verbal man and I love that he’s not squashed in the blossoming relationship with John by having to be silent about expressing what he would like to have happen. Lucky for us that SGC counted sex toys as a necessity, and not a personal item." LOL! More broad society stuff! I’m lapping these little bits up!
and his body twisted against the brutal embrace, but John held him down, stroking him as he bit him, and Rodney loved and hated the marking at one and the same time SQUEEEEEEEEEEE at teh hawtness!
Sorry to quote long passages but this …? "You're mine, Rodney. You have to learn to submit," he said. "I could tie you tighter, make sure you take what I want to hand out, for as long as I want to hand it out, but I'd prefer you to offer yourself up willingly, without trying to get out of it."
Rodney gazed at him blankly. "It hurt," he whimpered at last.
"I know." John gazed back at him, uncompromising. "That's what makes your submission the sweeter – if it's easy then you won't get the same high. Trust me." You just keep surprising me about how this is a totally new and different story because they are two very different men. I guess in some ways I always have a little corner of my mind remembering 24/7 (and the totality of the submission in the letter of the law - at least the way it appeared to Fox at the time) and it blows me out that this is so original and tailored to these two men. Just … wow! I love that this is all being worked through up front in the relationship – it’s different in that way – the absolute submission is discussed from the outset in terms of preferences and in terms of it possibly NOT happening e.g. all the modals could, would and the hypothetical if…
I loved it when Rodney was able to break through that barrier and simply submit – just *melts* And omg from their discussion … was that the life bond or the kaeira or something I missed in previous parts read?
I always love that you get to the essential difference by keying into the core verbal phrase – the semantic distinction between for example verbals like “can’t” and “don’t want to” and
Yay, yay, yay to Rodney not being a bratty attention seeking sub! Right in too many ways to count!
Oh dear you’ve got me all hot and steamy on the training to crave John in him! I flashed on that psychological training/thinking just as R said it seems important to you, and then there it was! Guh!
Also love how you keep flagging that “body before the mind” idea. I loved that Rodney’s body (and then mind) stills in close proximity to John. I think I described it as a cat and mouse thing before and there’s a certain amount of in thrall (or is that enthrall? *g*)
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on Sep. 16th, 2006 02:48 pm (UTC)Guh! Love roaming hands demanding and commanding obedience and respect!
And that John is so greedy for Rodney that there’s no way they are going to work! I love it when someone can’t get enough of the other!
And it’s very spot on to have Rodney still lacking confidence in the long term success of the relationship. He’s given his body, and his mind has relaxed enough to find out that it can be really good, and further on Rodney remembers he has trusted John with his heart too but re the relationship - I love that Rodney is still a bit confused about understanding what John sees in him and that that aspect is working out separately.
he'd been too overwhelmed to act out any kind of role at all last night oh you put into words what I was trying to say in my fb to Part 10 about the sex. Also I remembered another thought on Part 10 – that you avoided that cliché of the long elegant cock. Nice that John’s cock isn’t classically “beautiful”.
Ooh! I loved the blow job and Rodney can’t help but brag!
Knees trembling? Legs weak? Body totally boneless and un-coordinated?" lol!
"Although…if you could see your way clear to playing with it any time soon that would make me a very happy man," Rodney is such a verbal man and I love that he’s not squashed in the blossoming relationship with John by having to be silent about expressing what he would like to have happen.
Lucky for us that SGC counted sex toys as a necessity, and not a personal item." LOL! More broad society stuff! I’m lapping these little bits up!
and his body twisted against the brutal embrace, but John held him down, stroking him as he bit him, and Rodney loved and hated the marking at one and the same time SQUEEEEEEEEEEE at teh hawtness!
Sorry to quote long passages but this …? "You're mine, Rodney. You have to learn to submit," he said. "I could tie you tighter, make sure you take what I want to hand out, for as long as I want to hand it out, but I'd prefer you to offer yourself up willingly, without trying to get out of it."
Rodney gazed at him blankly. "It hurt," he whimpered at last.
"I know." John gazed back at him, uncompromising. "That's what makes your submission the sweeter – if it's easy then you won't get the same high. Trust me." You just keep surprising me about how this is a totally new and different story because they are two very different men. I guess in some ways I always have a little corner of my mind remembering 24/7 (and the totality of the submission in the letter of the law - at least the way it appeared to Fox at the time) and it blows me out that this is so original and tailored to these two men. Just … wow! I love that this is all being worked through up front in the relationship – it’s different in that way – the absolute submission is discussed from the outset in terms of preferences and in terms of it possibly NOT happening e.g. all the modals could, would and the hypothetical if…
I loved it when Rodney was able to break through that barrier and simply submit – just *melts* And omg from their discussion … was that the life bond or the kaeira or something I missed in previous parts read?
I always love that you get to the essential difference by keying into the core verbal phrase – the semantic distinction between for example verbals like “can’t” and “don’t want to” and
Yay, yay, yay to Rodney not being a bratty attention seeking sub! Right in too many ways to count!
Oh dear you’ve got me all hot and steamy on the training to crave John in him! I flashed on that psychological training/thinking just as R said it seems important to you, and then there it was! Guh!
Also love how you keep flagging that “body before the mind” idea. I loved that Rodney’s body (and then mind) stills in close proximity to John. I think I described it as a cat and mouse thing before and there’s a certain amount of in thrall (or is that enthrall? *g*)