John gazed at Carson blankly. "Like what?" he asked, in a bemused tone.
You used bemused correctly!! Sorry, I had to stop half way through the chapter and comment on that. I hope I'm not misinterpreting, but it looks like you've used it right! It's so frustrating for me reading stories and I'm like 'Did they use it properly (as in confused) or the way everyone does (as in sort of amused) but is technically wrong?' And you used it right. That makes the literature fangirl inside of me very happy.
Also, loving the story. Hiding in Plain Sight originally brought me here (being a huge Gibbs/DiNozzo fan) and because of you I know also watch SGA and get to read your amazing stories in this fandom :D
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You used bemused correctly!! Sorry, I had to stop half way through the chapter and comment on that. I hope I'm not misinterpreting, but it looks like you've used it right! It's so frustrating for me reading stories and I'm like 'Did they use it properly (as in confused) or the way everyone does (as in sort of amused) but is technically wrong?' And you used it right. That makes the literature fangirl inside of me very happy.
Also, loving the story. Hiding in Plain Sight originally brought me here (being a huge Gibbs/DiNozzo fan) and because of you I know also watch SGA and get to read your amazing stories in this fandom :D
!!! :D