I am really loving this story, but I guess that goes without saying, since I love everything you write. I do have to admit, BDSM usually isn't my thing, but I'm loving how you're making Rodney McKay and John see things from a different perspective. I'm also loving how uncomfortable Rodney is with the idea of total surrender. I can totally see where he's coming from. I can't wait to read more, and look forward to what happens next.