This is so wonderfully written! I'd really love to see this in movie form but the way you've written it is all so vivid I don't need to! LOL to Gibbs smacking Tony and both Tony and Shanti's heads jerking forward. Can just imagine Shanti snooping through people's drawers and bags too. Poor Tessa and Shanti having to put up with their oblivion and denial when they know they just want to be together all the time.

Really REALLY looking forward to the next part. :D