ext_222411 ([identity profile] aisling-k.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] xanthefic 2010-03-24 07:16 pm (UTC)

Thanks for writing another truly wonderful story. I really enjoyed this one, and I'm always astounded by how well you develop plot to carry your vision through - it never feels like the details of the story are just there as vehicles to propel the BDSM relationships.

I was particularly taken in this story by the focus on trust issues - I know that this is a predominant theme in a lot of your stories (or stories in this genre in general), but I thought we saw something different here, what with all the internal conflicts that the characters had. I actually really liked the Stacy character - I'd love to read or write a story for her! Darn those original characters.

My only disappointment is that the story ended at such a time that we were only treated to a single instance of Tony's daily spankings. For that reason alone I would support your decision to do more writing in this universe post-HiPS!!

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