Finally leaving feedback for this. I loved the story overall (not that that should surprise you in any way), but what I really loved was seeing both Tony and Gibbs grow through the process. By the time you got to the end, I could completely see why it took them 5 years to get to the place in HiPS. Frustrating, but understandable.

I too am in the process of reading HiPS. I didn't get as much read as I would have liked on the bumpy flight up, but it's nice for a relaxing day before I head back.

As you know, I'll be one of the cheerleaders encouraging you on for more parts in this 'verse. I know you said you have plenty of plot bunnies already, but if you need more I'm happy to send them (and some food) your way. :D