Finally, about two weeks after I started trying to put time aside to read this all the way through again, and I finally got it! Yay!
I decided to read it on LJ, clicking through parts, rather than on your site, because I think one of my favourite things about this fic and your writing in general is the way that you really build a story up, and structure it incredibly well. Every chapter had an ending, in which maybe a question posed earlier in the fic was answered but another one was posed, leaving me very much on the edge of my seat, eager to keep reading!
And that ability to plot stories so very densely is incredible, I'm completely jealous! ;-) And the thing is, this is so long, and well held together, and that's without a huge amount of decription in your writing style - that's not a criticism, your writing is brisk and crisp and to the point, and nothing gets in the way of me focusing on what's most important: the characters.
Because that stretched the boundaries of my ability to come up with actual constructive feedback, LOL, I'll sum up: ZOMG I LOVED IT! :-D
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I decided to read it on LJ, clicking through parts, rather than on your site, because I think one of my favourite things about this fic and your writing in general is the way that you really build a story up, and structure it incredibly well. Every chapter had an ending, in which maybe a question posed earlier in the fic was answered but another one was posed, leaving me very much on the edge of my seat, eager to keep reading!
And that ability to plot stories so very densely is incredible, I'm completely jealous! ;-) And the thing is, this is so long, and well held together, and that's without a huge amount of decription in your writing style - that's not a criticism, your writing is brisk and crisp and to the point, and nothing gets in the way of me focusing on what's most important: the characters.
Because that stretched the boundaries of my ability to come up with actual constructive feedback, LOL, I'll sum up: ZOMG I LOVED IT! :-D