ext_38387 ([identity profile] jayfray18.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] xanthefic 2009-10-18 04:08 pm (UTC)

There is just so much I love about this wonderful fic; your characterisation is perfect, you've let us have a glimpse back into the fabulous world of 24/7 (even if you did kill Murray!), the road you've taken Tony on, the way Gibbs has helped, and admitted his faults, the closure that Tony is starting to have regarding his other's accident. Have I missed anything hmmmm, oh yeah, the amazing hot scenes between them XP.

Tony stood there for a long time. Then he tiptoed over to the couch and sat down beside his father. His father stank of liquor and was muttering to himself in his sleep, but he didn't wake up. Tony edged closer and closer until he was nestled up beside him. Then he took hold of his father’s arm and pulled it so that it was around his own shoulders.

Then, finally, he fell asleep. In the morning, he woke up to find that his father was still lying there – still drunk and still dead to the world.

Tony crept out of the study and went back upstairs to his room. His father never even knew he’d been there.
This really did break me today, I was in tears reading about a little lost boy who just wanted his Dad to make everything right again, only to be pushed away and ignore.

Thank you for sharing this with us m'dear:)


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