Apart from crying my eyes out over these 3 chapters, I feel like swearing left, right and centre over Tony's masochistic martyrdom he's so pent on living. Gibbs definitely needs to Tony on a short leash same way I keep my dog to keep them out of trouble for their own safety. Maybe I should lend Gibbs the my dog's collar the one with studs facing inwards so that when you pull the dog or Tony pull less.
Just knew Tony wouldn't safe word when Gibbs caned up, wasn't surprised he did with the psychological punishment of having to hear about his family life.
A little suprised Ducky hasn't put two and two together yet.
Glad Tony and Stan got sorted out, so Tony could realise his place with Gibbs was safe.
Loved the idea of Gibbs charging in Rambo style to rescue his 'damsel' in distress.

At the end of the other chapter somebody likened you to Hitchcock and Christie, but I think they forgot to add Roald Dahl and Stephen King for the twists and turns.

Looking foward to the final 3 chapters tomorrow.