ext_2489 ([identity profile] chaps1870.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] xanthefic 2005-12-23 05:33 pm (UTC)

I admit that spanking is not one of my kinks but I like your writing style too much to avoid this one. I liked that it was Carson doing the spanking because I don't think any one else would have worked as well or would have convinced me about the reasons for said spanking. It just seemed to work with Carson and it didn't squick me as much as it could have.

Now, you've been punished and we won't mention it again.
I thought that line alone justified the whole spanking thing for both men. I really liked the lead in to the spanking itself and made it easier to understand what both men were thinking and why it was necessary. I know I'm going on but like I said I'm not spanky person but you made this one work.

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