Wow, this just keeping getting better. I am completely in awe of your fabulous writing skills!
Quinn gives me the creeps ... ugh. I felt literally sick inside reading his dialogue.
I like how you wrote the dad though. It wasn't what was I expecting but I like that he felt remorse and wanted to try with Tony.
But yay for Tony and Gibbs getting together. They still have some stuff to work out but it's getting better!
Tony's eyes flashed excitedly, and he gave a holler of sheer joy. "Oh yeah! Little Anthony is back in business!" he whooped. Is it wrong that I laughed when I read that? A lot, to be honest. It's about time Tony got some happiness though. &hearts :D
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Quinn gives me the creeps ... ugh. I felt literally sick inside reading his dialogue.
I like how you wrote the dad though. It wasn't what was I expecting but I like that he felt remorse and wanted to try with Tony.
But yay for Tony and Gibbs getting together. They still have some stuff to work out but it's getting better!
Tony's eyes flashed excitedly, and he gave a holler of sheer joy. "Oh yeah! Little Anthony is back in business!" he whooped.
Is it wrong that I laughed when I read that? A lot, to be honest. It's about time Tony got some happiness though. &hearts :D
Wonderful job! :)