I just had to have a quick peek at what you did with Tony's father's entrance scene to ncis. Wow! You really changed it! I love it and think it's works so well! I empathize with him more easily, without feeling like I'm letting him off the hook for his culpability. I love how you extended that line of Tony's with, "Yes, you did." Note perfect! He actually admits it, and that's another emotional step for him too,something he has to do before his relationship with him can start to heal.

I think Tony's father's reaction in wanting to go kill Quinn with his bare hands is much more "matched" now with how he presents up to that point.