ext_3524 ([identity profile] amy-thrace821.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] xanthefic 2009-04-03 11:53 pm (UTC)

This was another great part. I'm glad we're beginning to get some resolution, but that it's in a gradual, believable way.

I also really love what you've done with Tony's dad. I've never seen him written in this way, where he definitely has issues, but he's not a bad guy, just one who never quite got over his wife. It's plausible, and gives you the ability to imagine a resolution between Tony and his dad at some point, which would be nice.

Looking forward to tomorrow's update! I'll be sad to see this end though.

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