When I heard around the grapevine that you were doing another one of your stories I just had to find out which fandom it would be in. The thing is I would have read whatever it was, your writing is exquisite and leaves me wanting more. Your characters are spot on and I can picture it all in my head.

I loved that you also had the team act in family fashion together. I normally don't like Ziva but she was perfect in this story as well as everyone each having their own part. You didn't leave anyone out, not even secondary characters. Having Tony's Dad actually having some love for his son was a refreshing part in Tony 'angst' stories.

I did see you start posting this early in the week but I held back so that I could read it one go. Even though you have one more part to go and I can barely wait for it. Hopefully Tony will move down his road of recovery with the help of Gibbs and his team members.

Awesome job as always ^.^