Oh totally on the show, she's pretty one dimensional. She's just got no substance, its as if she just isn't interested in people at all. So the way you've written her is so refreshing. She's more than the scary mossad chick, she really cares about her team, her friends, her family. I love the contrast between her feelings for her own family and the one she's made for herself, she's clearly dedicated to protecting them. I'm not even really a Ziva fan, but I love her in this fic. If they wrote her like this on the show, I'd probably like er a whole lot more.

I forgot to mention before that I'm seriously adoring little McGee. He's such a sweetheart. He's trying so hard to be there for Tony. I just wanna hug him.