*takes a deep breath* Okay, so I must admit to having a really big problem with Gibbs bottoming. Usually. And I must emphazise the "usually" in this case because really, I was a bit worried before about the coming sex. Because for me there was no way, the way you wrote all this, that Tony could bottom right from the start. It's just not possible. So yeah, I was worried, I have to admit, because it only left the other option of Gibbs bottoming, which just... wierds me out.

Now? Not so much. It made sense. And it was good. For me saying that, it's a big deal. But really, you pulled it off for me. Congratulations.

But aside from that: I loved Tony's father and how you wrote him. Not the off the top bastard everyone else seems to make him out to be. No, he was a human, and a shattered one at that. I really like what you did with his person.

Also the protectiveness of the whole team towards Tony. Very good.

Roy Quinn - I don't know what to say about him. It's almost creepy how good you portrayed him (though "good" in this sense really is meant as "sick and twisted"). I actually felt slimy myself while reading his interview with Gibbs, and I juggled my leg all the while. It was just... no words. Again.

Only one more part, right? I'm curious how you'll end it all.