ext_294113 ([identity profile] alicejung613.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] xanthefic 2009-05-25 01:49 pm (UTC)

Also great chapter! Plot development was also remarkable.

I understand Tony's anxiety about going back to hotel and telling Ziva the truth. When Gibbs stopped Tony from running away, his support and his word were touching. Your choice of words was brilliant!

When Tony finally told Ziva the truth about whole case, it got serious. But Ziva being Ziva, and she offered Tony that she could kill those bastards without leaving any evidence. At that line, I couldn't help but laughing out loud. As always, your wonderful characterization made me cry and laugh. I really enjoy experiencing these feelings when I read stories or watch movies. Thanks to you, I can feel both of them from this story. :-)

I really like your version of Director Vance. I hope real Vance in the show is more understanding and more reliable. In fact, I didn't care for Director Shepard either. Director Morrow was the best of all so far, because I felt that he seemed to understand team Gibbs.

Yeah, you were totally right about kissing can be as good as sex. I love Gibbs and Tony's intimacy. That was so natural. I really think Gibbs and Tony are meant to be with each other.

Hotel scene was just perfect. The way Tony finally accept Tonio, the kid he once was, and the way Tony finally realized that he was being loved by whom he'd loved for 8 years were just... perfect! It looked Tony's worst nightmare was done with the help of Gibbs. I think your psychological insight is outstading. Your story is not only interesting but also informative. Thank you for sharing! :)

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