ext_1683: (NCIS ~ Gibbs_Tony_heart and mind)
ext_1683 ([identity profile] liresius.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] xanthefic 2009-01-02 06:18 am (UTC)

Oh *happy sighs* I love this story!

I knew she would be called the 'Abigail' the moment McGee wondered about the boat name! Yay!

And I loved Tony sacking Felicity. Finally, the old Tony up to his old tricks! But with the very best motivations. I loved how that was also a very Tony way of saying thank you to McGee.

I really loved how you wrote this through McGee's eyes. It surprised me actually. I thought it would be more Gibbs centred, in the sense of bringing Tony back to himself. Lovely that it was McGee's observations that made Tony think about what he had.

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