I always know I'll be reading a great story when I click on your link, but this one is far and away your best story in your NCIS fandom and second-best of any of your fandoms (SGA's The General and Dr. Sheppard being my fav). All the characters are true and their voices real. I adore that you made Sacks out to be human, LOL. McGee is perfect as director and Tony's darkness is haunting.

I of course, hate that you killed off Abby and Ziva (and maybe you could have put a off-screen death warning in the notes), but loved how stong McGee and Palmer became, how mellow Gibbs became and how dark and obssessed Tony became.

I liked your OFC of Felicity Morris. She reminded me of Kate, but with Ziva's butt-kicking abilities.

All in all, a terrific non-smutty story. Now if you could throw some smut in, well . . .

Thanks!