xanthefic | Hiding in Plain Sight

Well this was certainly worth waiting for! I've read the whole thing twice, and favorite parts more than that. It's so touching and so hot. I loved seeing the various couples and how they relate with different dynamics. The capture and torture were harder to read. The way you got Gibbs and Tony together at the end was so hot! I think Gibbs is the toppiest character I've ever read, and I love seeing him in this universe. I love this universe and am so happy you've written more in it. I went back and re-read both General and Doctor Sheppard and Coming Home. Thank you so much for writing this long and wonderful story.

Thank you! I'm delighted you enjoyed it :-)

Have just found this and read the whole thing in 2 days! Alot not be said for not being able to move due to a bad back and wireless internet!!

This was wonderful. The characterisation was spot on. Even though I have never watched SGA I found I didn't need to know the show as you portrayed the charcters beautifully. And though I am a huge fan of Gibbs and Dinozzo, my favourite chapter was when Ziva first got into bed with Tim, it was so emotional and beautiful. I have to say that you have an amazing gift in your writing.

Am now going to read Coming home and General and Doctor Sheppard.

Thak you for sharing them.

Thank you so much! I'm sorry to hear about your back but glad my fic was able to cheer you up :-)

Would it be too cliché to just leave a comment full of fan-ish squee? I finished this almost 12 hours ago and still can't think coherently.

I read the notes a while back but was a bit scared to actually read it - I'm sure you know that things like this can go horribly wrong - but then I read "Andy", which was so good that I decided this would at least be Not Terrible, but then you blew my expectations out of the water. (I feel horrible saying I expected it to suck, but... um... I try to be a good person?) I stayed up until after 5 am reading Andy and then HIPS (which makes me laugh every time I abbreviate it, too), and basically I am saying that you should write more more more more more. When my brain has recovered, I will dig around in here and read everything else you've ever written. (See, you there, you're making me break a promise to myself. I said I wasn't going to read any more SGA-fic until I go around to watching at least more of the series, but I just can't stop myself.) And now I am babbling, but maybe that conveys how much I loved this? I hope so. Because otherwise this is just pointless and annoying. (Much as I try not to be either of those, I'm both. My apologies.)

Summary: Loved it, brain dead, reading more. :D

Fannish squee is *always* fine by me *g*. I'm just delighted you loved it so much. I hope you like my other stuff - although, you might like to settle in for the Winter with it - I've been writing fanfic for 10 years and I'm very prolific. So I won't hold you to reading quite *everything*...*g*.

Hi there, I'm so glad that I found this - it was by a pure accident that I came across your journal. I didn't realize that you were on LJ too! I came across your Hiding in Plain Sight and the other one - the one where there are the Sheppard and McKay twins (Sorry, I can't remember the title) on another website (again, I can't remember which one!) and I must say, both were great, well-written, and you did both a great justice. I read both in one night - a very, very long night! Ended up going to bed at about 5am and had a nice long dream ~wink~

Thank you for sharing such great stories.

Now, I'm off to check your other stories out! :)

Ah - glad you enjoyed them!

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