*sob* it's all over and read. Powerful storytelling, and very emotionally satisfying :) I've tried to leave comments on each section, since you put so much work into this huge monster story, and so much is going on, there's so much to say in return. Thank you for the weeks entertainment :)

I'd love to see the puddlejumper mishap, and add my vote to begging for the Kolya debacle.

What I'd love to see even more: A bit between CH & G&DS - after John & Rodney's marriage, where Rodney forces John to own up to the fact of the Lifebond they have and to go for it, and everything that it means. I'd love to see something dealing with the lifebond, how it's done and what it means and all that. What can I say, you whump Rodney very, very well, but I have a soft spot for John being whumped on and then being cared for/worried over.