Oh oh! That was a fabulous chapter! I got my whumpage and ruthless toppy action!
Whoo, that was very intense with Ziva and Tim in the Jumper. And I'm so glad you varied the rescue scene as I thought when Teyla was saying all the "been here, done that" that the savage natives had maybe learned something from the experience!
Lovd that you used the signing to hint at something but hold back the reveal of the Daedalus til the last moment - very clever!
I loved this paragraph ...
Gibbs’s knife was in his hand and for a split second he and Sheppard locked gazes. Jordan might not resist arrest but they all knew there wasn’t going to be any arrest. Gibbs didn’t let anyone hurt his sub this badly and live, and he sure as hell knew that John Sheppard didn’t either. Sheppard held Jordan up, arms twisted behind him, and Gibbs waited. He and Sheppard had a wordless conversation, each understanding the other perfectly, and then Sheppard thrust Jordan forward and held him there – held him up, and held him still, offering him to Gibbs. *shivers*
... and I loved that John broke his neck! Yay, for dark possessive Tops!
I loved the Gibbs / John's toppy bonding over staying with their subs, trusting only each other to guard them and said subs whole conversation. Wonderful!
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Whoo, that was very intense with Ziva and Tim in the Jumper. And I'm so glad you varied the rescue scene as I thought when Teyla was saying all the "been here, done that" that the savage natives had maybe learned something from the experience!
Lovd that you used the signing to hint at something but hold back the reveal of the Daedalus til the last moment - very clever!
I loved this paragraph ...
Gibbs’s knife was in his hand and for a split second he and Sheppard locked gazes. Jordan might not resist arrest but they all knew there wasn’t going to be any arrest. Gibbs didn’t let anyone hurt his sub this badly and live, and he sure as hell knew that John Sheppard didn’t either. Sheppard held Jordan up, arms twisted behind him, and Gibbs waited. He and Sheppard had a wordless conversation, each understanding the other perfectly, and then Sheppard thrust Jordan forward and held him there – held him up, and held him still, offering him to Gibbs. *shivers*
... and I loved that John broke his neck! Yay, for dark possessive Tops!
I loved the Gibbs / John's toppy bonding over staying with their subs, trusting only each other to guard them and said subs whole conversation. Wonderful!