Every chapter is better and better. I enjoyed the action sequence and what it said about the characters. Ziva with Tim was very sweet and I loved how Gibbs uber-top can actually talk a Top down. This is like the second time he showed that his instincts are not confined to Subs. Pretty nifty. I also enjoyed how by seeing a the back story of several of his Subs we are also learning more about who Gibbs is. Finally its nice how the actual series is reflected in your story, especially the Gibbs-Tony dynamic

Zaz