Wow they moved faster then I thought they were going to, which is a good thing as the waiting was killing me! *just do it already!*

No I have to say you have the pacing right, it doesn't feel rushed or like it's lagging; and the ending of this chapter almost had me in tears.... aw, John thinking about what his parents would make of Rodney; and putting their photo out on display after so many years. *sniff*

btw Jeannie? *well too good!*

*goes back to waiting*