I had to LOL at the "attempted submissive kidnappings!" *g*. When I first had that idea I was just laughing to myself - I had to check with Bluespirit whether it was actually too bonkers to use but I *liked* it damnit, and she did too, so in it went. Which is a good thing as I want to do something with it in the next story. But it still makes me laugh *ggg*.

There's some more Teyla stuff later - I was surprised how easy it was to fit her into this story and this universe.

And I didn't see Ford/Carson coming either! I just sort of wrote it and then stared at the screen going "what?!"

Thanks for your great feedback!