ext_27111 ([identity profile] slash-reader.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] xanthefic 2006-09-14 12:04 pm (UTC)

oooo.... I read this whole chapter with a big grin on my face - just brilliant!

Especially loved:

He hated impossibly handsome people. He especially hated impossibly handsome people with an easygoing charm and perfect childhoods. It was irritating.
*g* got it all in a nutshell

He didn't have the heart to tell the colonel that if he was going to repeat the feat in the field then Sheppard would have to be standing right behind him, whispering in his ear the entire time.
the whole shooting scene I loved - the classic cliche of 'helping' & coping a feel at the same time lol

A special hair sub - the servant of the gel.
rofl - my favourite line so far - superb!

& then the whole off-planet thing with possessive!John coming out - heh

off to chap 8....

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